White Lightning Productions

hmm i see what you mean.

i really only wanted some feed back so i might be able to improve on them.

it would be cool as hell if WLP made these shirts. thats kinda why i was posting em here

how would you sugest i submit them then?

and do you think you could help me tweak them so there better? style wise and gramaticly?

I really don't know how to answer all these questions just now.

The first step to cleaning up the ideas, of course, is to fix the grammar and spelling. Mistakes always distract from the humor.

As for submitting them, the main question there is of payment. WLP pays $50 for shirt designs with -illustrations-. Just plain ideas would be much less, if at all. Plagarism questions are even more awkward with shirt designs because shirt designs are so simple- it's quite common to come up with the same or similar designs completely by ACCIDENT, never mind design.

Second idea would be-

Keep said ideas in confidence. Not posting on Imageshack, where anyone can browse your idea, and then steal it.

unfortunately, it happens... look at all the shirts with some random deviantart image on it... or... Todd F***ing Goldman...

Other than that, they are kinda good ideas, diamonds in the rough, if you will. I mean, there's already shirts about "I don't want to hear about your 12th level Paladin" type thing-

Ben's current alignment? Somewhere between Chaotic Rutger Hauer & Lawful Rutger Hauer. I'd guess... Rutger Hauer Rutger Hauer.

Lessee.... Would that be Neutral/Neutral Rutger Hauer? Double neutrals are the mpst dangreous alignment: they can do anything and not need an "alignment check roll".
Add in the basic Rutger Hauer and you really do have a Universe Conquerer type. Conan would run home to mommie!