by K-MacK » Sun Feb 19, 2006 6:10 pm
Dark Zel's art: Peter being "Carried" away by Sarah,while chibi Jean
rides and -- is that Rebecca-- is hanging on near the "floor" IS funny,
and captures the sense of the story to-date.
Similarly, 'Becca's" Valentine's day "Heart" isn't actually all that NC-17,
unless you know the Character. Whooo! Red Paint on Blond Fur....hope she realizes what's what before she fuzzes up.
The plot itself is getting better...suspense, a dash of reality ("I'm not
here."), and a feeling of those Saturday Matinees is back and strong as well. That means Cliff-Hangers, for the under 40 crowd....
Add in the Title of the Chapter "Lycanthropy 101" and here we see a bit more of WereWolves from the Writer's point of view. One Big Hairy
Worried Question: The Chapters end in a couple of Months (according to
the Archive--) They don't, do they? They DO go on, don't they? Kris,
you just ran out of space, Didn't you?
Talk about Cliff-Hangers........
KMacK...
"You don't have to be invisible when everybody is looking the wrong way..."
Writing the series "Wulfen Blood"... getting ready for publication.