by Kris@WLP » Tue May 16, 2006 9:38 pm
Oh, my, I have a LOT of editing to do. I'm going to leave up the spoilers for now, but here are the factual errors I'm going to correct:
The plan to have parallel adults-only and general-audience pages was from the inception of the comic. It merely took a while for differences between the two to become apparent.
Although the word "thrall" comes from an old word for slave, Sarah is not Peter's slave- merely a "created" werewolf Peter is responsible for.
Sarah is holding Butch Cramer's throat at the end of their fight- holding it, not biting down. Further, it's not secondary infection of lycanthropy that kills in this situation; wounds caused by werewolf fangs or claws don't heal rapidly in the same fashion most other wounds do.
Gus doesn't "come to blows" with anyone; no punches are thrown, bites inflicted, etc.
Sarah wasn't enraged at Con, she was terrified.
Butch Cramer has not given up on Peter.
Most of the pack is not aware of the existence of the capture squads; for whatever reason, they only appear to bedevil Peter.
Thanks for the entry, though; I didn't post it directly to Wikipedia myself because I felt that, if it were important enough for it to be on Wikipedia, someone else would start a post. Now that someone has, I can fix the factual errors.