White Lightning Productions

A page!

Also, I could use some QUICK comments on WLP's current con situation- I need to make a decision by morning Thurs. 5-17-12:

http://wlp.livejournal.com/115460.html

Eeyup, they're going to exploit her for the publicity, getting a few photos of her eating in the shop.

"The park monster prefers our burgers!"

All while Peter watches on in horror.

Quick! Someone check to see if "Parkie Meal" is already trademarked!

Wait a minute... "Why do I never got the good luck?" Peter's in such a panic he can't even THINK in proper grammar. Also, why does the main page show last week's as well as this week's?

I like the manager's reaction to Sarah. Instead of fear or horror or even confusion, he's starstruck that a really famous celebrity just walked into his restaurant.

The manager reminds me of the McDowell's guy from Coming to America.

My question is how is Peter going to cover for Sarah to the rest of the pack? This is sure to get out for publicity and I don't think that Sarah fits the local papers thaat she is a Sasquatch...

This is gonna be interesting.

Hello. I'm new to PitW after discovering it at OwlCon, so I finally decided to join the forums after reading through it.

I'll bet Peter is wishing he had a MIB neuralizer and a pair of sunglasses right now.

But seriously, was the grammar of Peter's thoughts in the first two panels deliberately messed up to emphasize how frazzled he is?

Not sure what happened myself. I've basically been copypasta-ing from the emailed script. But one more thing to tweak when I'm working on pages.

Parkie can haz cheezburger?

On the matter I referred to up top: no word from Animazement re: confirming vacancies, so looks like I'm staying home next week. Sorry.

Also, I will be at A-Kon the weekend following, but Ben just can't afford to go- no money AND no time off to spare.

Booo! Sarah had her boobs reduced in size! Bad! ;D

She did? Aw gawd.. It's honestly very difficult to keep in mind the size of her boobs from page to page, given how ridiculously large they are, and how she has to interact with objects... speaking of no money, I found out that I haven't slept enough with that stupid apnea mask on to have it fully covered by my insurance! 'Cause it's my fault if the thing falls off my face. Then again, I'm not sure it happens on accident, I think I've seriously been yanking the thing off my face while still asleep.

Update on con question: Animazement DOES have space, so I WILL try to go- I need to make up the money I just had to blow on a new monitor and HDMI cable... plus the money from UltimaCon that does NOT look like it's coming back...

Incidentally, when I scripted this I imagined the place as being a standard cookie-cutter drive-thru fast food place, like Burger King or White Castle or the like. Burger places like Bray's are pretty rare down here, REALLY rare outside major urban centers, so I usually don't think of them as a setting.

So if there are places the script or scene seems a little out of whack, put it down to different mental visions of writer and artist in the creative process.

@bar1:

I only nitpick about the boobs cause I am an admitted boob hound, so whenever you make them smaller then what she normally is I go "NOoooooooooooooooooo!"

Same with Ashley, whenever you draw then smaller, a small part of me dies ;p

Just dropping a little note here about something elsethread:

viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2792

Based on the "look at those boobies" comment, would Peter be able to shout "Look everyone can see her boobs!" at Sarah and embarrass her into running and hiding? Or does wolf-Sarah just not care enough to be bothered by it?