White Lightning Productions

Still haven't put together the crowdsourcing video- I've had no time to do it, between relatives staying with me and business (convention restocks and planning for new shows in November and December). Hell, I've only been able to put forward two weeks' worth of scripts for next week and week after.

Anyway, update posting within the hour. This ends the exposition- and, I trust, relieves a few of you who have been screaming at the screen the last few pages about how stupid this is.

Remember: if it works, it's not stupid.

Man Ashley and Noah are jerkasses, but I guess everyone knew that. No wonder they only get used for their bodies instead of their minds, though I'm surprised Ashley is being so warm to Danny right now. He must be a better sexual performer than he looks.

It took me a minute to figure out the last panel joke before remembering about the electric shocks. I think if the big second to last panel had been a little taller to actually show the pads still attached to Noah's nipples it would be quicker to get, but this is just me being nip, I mean, nit picky.

Kris, do you keep your work hidden from your family members, or do they already know about your porn comic peddling?

Figure since this weekend the script outright invokes Star Trek, I should mention that last week's page featured my attempt to draw the famous Kirk's Rock

Why is Jean wearing a monocle in the last frame?

Nah, just a bit awkward drawing of her eye & hair.

Ah okay.

It's probably just because if a PitW character was going to suddenly start wearing a monocle for no apparent reason, it would be Jean.

Sarah should also do something to Daniel for that "Time of Death" bet joke (if it is a joke). Out of curiosity if the Muzzle Group had its own ranking (Alpha, Omega) what places would they all have? Would Pete be the Omega there too or would someone be lower than him for once?

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