Page 385 (Book 4 Pg. 7) (4-13-2017)

[Kris@WLP]

Retribution will have to wait until new clothes, apparently.

[Happygun]

...NOW she's self-conscious about being nude in front of strangers?

[ShadowMage]

*facepalm* Aaaalllrighty, then.

Noah, wipe that retarded grin off your face. You're NEVER getting a piece of that. Fuck off already.

Erica, SHUT YOUR FAT, IMPULSIVE, BOSSY BITCH ASS THE FUCK UP.

Sarah...

*closes eyes, pinches bridge of nose between fingers, sighs in exasperation*

...De-wolf, and go get a change of clothes.

[Ganthan]

Okay, now's the time when I offer up my art critique. I'm significantly underwhelmed at Sarah's physique here. She just looks too skinny. She needs to be bigger and more defined in both muscles and boobs.

[JohnPR]

Some suggestions for improvement.

Muscle bulk and definition between the range of a female fitness model and a female body builder. A fairly low body fat index apart from her breasts. The lack of definition on her back makes it difficult distinguish upper back, lower back, and buttocks which make her appear shorter or stockier without other characters sharing the frame as a reference, and makes the tail look like it is coming out half way down her lower back rather than just above the buttocks. The breasts perkier. The muscle development helps support them facing forward. The top edges of the nipples just below the equator of the breasts due to gravity having some say in physics. The nipples themselves more pronounced being large enough to be cupped in about 1 to 2/3 of a human-sized palm. When Juniper or Peter have tried sucking them their mouths had to be opened but not strained to fit. The areola should be visible and extend from the edge of the nipple a distance equal to the radius of the nipple when viewed head on. Hope this helps.

[matteso585]

Well that transformation escalated quickly.

[CmdrPowers]

I am not going to criticize our new artist just because she doesn't draw Sarawuff the same way Bar-1 did. She has her own style and I for one am very pleased with it. You hear me, Kris? Good Job! Good Boy! Good Girl! You all get biscuits.

[tHEfOOL]

Seriously people chill out, new artist= new art style. Kris wouldn't have had Padunk start drawing the comic if he wasn't happy with her art. Just wait and see how it all turns out.

[Ganthan]

[Ganthan]

I'm guessing it's a late/no update week due to Kris driving to Chattanooga?