Book 2 Cover Lineart, 7-17-2013

[Kris@WLP]

Chapter 13 begins next week (after three rewrites)!

In the meantime, here's the lineart for the PitW Book 2 graphic novels, both versions!

We're probably going to try IndieGoGo for boosting the Book 2 PG-13 version. Kickstarter just booted a PG card game because it had tentacles in it (again), and that plus certain other controversies make it almost certain PitW would also get punted.

[bar1scorpio]

Or we could try "Fund Anything" and risk association with Donald Trump...

[Arkus0]

And on today's Muzzle Group activity just for the girls, "What is in Peter's pants?"

Great cover art, and nice to see Ashley with a smile.

[ThomasNewton12]

Nice details on the first cover. Ben does torn-clothes effects very well, like Jean's showing off here. Who's in the doghouse, though?

Of course, the second cover is great - and I'm not just saying that because of Ashley! (Though like Arkus said, seeing look good wearing a smile and a cowboy hat) It's good to see anime expressions like Sarah's back again. Is Debbie Wynn's Notebook going to have a lot of new measurements? Those are important, you know, for science!

Don't know what IndieGoGo will let you get away with, but their model is a lot better for situations about mitigating risk like this since you keep the funds regardless of your goals. I'll be interested in seeing what reward tiers you guys put up. Do you have a plan for publicizing the campaign?

[Kris@WLP]

[ThomasNewton12]

[Kris@WLP]

[Ganthan]

Top panel: Not surprising that Jean holds the leashes in this fearsome threesome. Wuffy Sarah in the doghouse looks like she's grabbing Peter's butt.

Bottom panel: Niiice. We'll just call this "Extra Credit." At times like this I can't tell if Peter is the luckiest guy in the world or the unluckiest. Sarah is clearly not amused, however. She could easily just go all Wolf of Steel and punt everyone away from her meat, er, boyfriend.

[Kris@WLP]

[Ganthan]

Oh yeah, I forgot to ask...

I assume that furry thing in the bottom right corner is the tip of Ashley's fox tail?

I also right just now noticed that Peter looks like he's missing his chin. Ashley also could have been doing more, like boobhatting Peter or something. Aside from those two things, though, very awesome fun looking picture.

[Kris@WLP]

[Ganthan]

[bar1scorpio]

I'll add that in color, the leashes & collars are also going to be red, playing off that trope.

[Ganthan]

[Kris@WLP]

[Ganthan]

[bar1scorpio]

Yyyyyyyup. ^_^

[Kaeto]

I wouldn't have thought Cherry would have been among those rooting in Peter's pants given her stated aversion to a male. I actually thought she preferred females.

[Ganthan]

[Kris@WLP]

[Kaeto]

And yet on April 8th and 29th of 2009 she freaks out because she "Saw Weenie"


Oops the boss posted while I was writing my post.

[cawsking555]

um can we get an the back and front with the looking at peters crouch with a 2 part with Shara in wolf pushing every one away