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White Lightning Productions • View topic - Critique my Comic page

Critique my Comic page

Show off your art and stories here- but keep it out of the gutter!

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Do you think I'm capable of makeing a sucessfull comic?

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Critique my Comic page

Postby Marshalpoi » Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:14 am

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what do you think of my page work. Is it up to par for a comic? Do you get a sense of what's going on? Can you imagine what those word bubbles might actually say? Dose it appear to have a general style?

I'll gladly accept any critiques you have. I know the importance of getting unbiased reviews of your work from someone other then close friend or family member.

I dont care if you just poke fun at my linework. Any comment will do.
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Postby Kris@WLP » Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:01 pm

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Postby K-MacK » Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:00 pm

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Writing the series "Wulfen Blood"... getting ready for publication.
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